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Wednesday, July 28, 2021

Sam Dickson on Athlete profile




Hi guys 

I think I did quite well on my Athlete profile but next time I could be more focused on my work we are learning about a biographies  to give a account about a persons life and achievements. next time I could  add more description on who I'm learning about and better facts.

 

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  1. UnknownJuly 28, 2021 at 1:38 PM

    Hi Tia,

    Well done on your profile about Sam Dickson. I really enjoyed reading it.

    Just make sure when you are writing your post on your blog that you remember to use fullstops.

    Otherwise well done for getting it done so quickly ☺️

    Miss Lauder

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    1. AnonymousJuly 28, 2021 at 2:02 PM

      Yep sure I will do that right away

      Thanks Miss Lauder:)

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