Thursday, August 27, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi, Tia
ReplyDeleteI love that you have added backgrounds to your writing, it makes me feel like I am actually IN the story. Have you thought of making your writing (text) a bit bigger? It may mean that you will have to add another few slides but it may make it easier to read.
I enjoyed reading your story and seeing all the language features (like onomatopoeia) that you used to capture the attention of the audience.
Have a good day,
Mrs M